Made an small groove metal rap piece (First time rap-vocals)

[DeKay]

This happens when I take a mic in my hand and feel like a black brother:

I don't even give a fuck:
I don't even give a fuck (v3) by Caynug on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

swag

Equipment used:
PRS MM Baritone equipped with 17-90 strings
Line 6 spider III 150 amp
Audacity
FL Studio
Microsoft webcam (liking the sound better than my microphone hah)
Played the drums on my keyboard

Now give me some comments

 

[Larcher]

first thing that came to mind was djent bizkit

 

[DeKay]

first thing that came to mind was djent bizkit

So one my other pieces is called korn-meshuggah and now this? Djent bizkit seriously? oh wait, I don't even give a fuck cause when I do I get stuck

Funniest comment I ever got man, larcher is da man.

 

[Adversor]

Guitars are too low in the mix and you sound like Snoop Dogg, lol.

 

[DeKay]

Guitars are too low in the mix and you sound like Snoop Dogg, lol.

Yea somehow the guitars went to quiet after I raised up the vocals a bit since someone else said the vocals are to quiet...

I am German and 19 years old. How can I sound like a black weed smokin american

Thanks man for the comment! Gonna make the guitars louder as next step, gonna record this whole thing anyway it all started as an quick idea recorded in 20 minutes.

 

[Djentleguy]

Nice! "Open" the guitars a bit and you got an awesome mix

 

[DeKay]

Nice! "Open" the guitars a bit and you got an awesome mix

Yea you are right, it would make them seem more present. I think I should open them up at about 5khz to 10khz for a brighter sound.

 

[DeKay]

Nice! "Open" the guitars a bit and you got an awesome mix

Does this sound better overall?

DeKay - I don't even give a fuck (v4) by Caynug on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

 

[Weareclocks]

The voice needs to be more present and less bassy to really fit in the mix. You might have to adjust your guitars to give the vocals a space in the mix. Don't make your guitars TOO rumbly either, I can't hear your bass :/ As for drum tones, your snare sounds a bit lame, find a different sample or EQ and compress the dick out of it! haha

Cool shit otherwise, though. Not REALLY my bag of chips, but I see where it's going!

C4C? http://www.sevenstring.org/forum/recording-studio/203355-dividing-line-prog-death-metal.html

 

[Djentleguy]

Does this sound better overall?

DeKay - I don't even give a fuck (v4) by Caynug on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

Sick bro!! the overall mix needs some small adjustments though. But this is awesome and much better than the first one!

 

[DeKay]

Sick bro!! the overall mix need some small adjustments though. But this is awesome and much better than the first one!

Thanks man you are really nice. I lost my bands drummer due to that he wanted to play more death metal styled music than this groovy shit.. so I really needed this cheer up!

 

[Djentleguy]

Thanks man you are really nice. I lost my bands drummer due to that he wanted to play more death metal styled music than this groovy shit.. so I really needed this cheer up!

Glad I helped! If you say you're into groove then tell me what you think about this little part of a song I'm working on.

Drop G# Groove Metal Test by Grim Riffer on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

And that's a full one(oriental metal if you like this kind of stuff)

Original Metal Song - Oriental(Final-unmastered) by Grim Riffer on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

Mastered:
Original Metal Song - Oriental(Mastered by 92guitarguy) by Grim Riffer on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

 

[Konfyouzd]

Yea... This kinda takes me back to the mid - late 90s (except I don't think they tuned quite that low at the time)... Pretty cool stuff

 

[DeKay]

Yea... This kinda takes me back to the mid - late 90s (except I don't think they tuned quite that low at the time)... Pretty cool stuff

Oh my god man, this is the thing I always wanted! To catch my own style but with an 1990-2000 vibe... They did not tune that low but damn, that's really making me feel good to hear something like that. Thank you!