7 String Progressive Metal-Critiques wanted!

[BrianWaymire]

Screaming from Within This Void
Neo Star Nova-Z - Screaming From Within This Void (Album Version) by Brian Michael Waymire on SoundCloud - Hear the world

I've been really trying to improve my mixes and I feel I've come to a high point. What do YOU think?

and just so I can "promote" it. here's the link if you want to download it (free of course)
Screaming from Within This Void (Single) | Neo Star Nova-Z

 

[BaDaML]

The guitar to me sounds really thin.

 

[Yo_Wattup]

I remember the days when bass drums had bass... good times...

 

[BrianWaymire]

thank you for your opinions!