Song Critique / Ideas

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  1. nollyflip

    nollyflip SS.org Regular

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    billinder33 SS.org Regular

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    I dug it as it was... short and to the point. Would make a great instrumental interlude inserted between a couple of longer songs.
     
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    nollyflip SS.org Regular

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    Thanks for the feedback man. Appreciate it
     
  4. duffbeer33

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    I was thinking maybe an ambient part after the second section, but like billinder said, you might just want to keep this as is. Another idea is to do a quick turnaround and then go back to the main riff. This song sounds like it would be good with a wah guitar solo if you extend it. Good job. That scream at beginning scared me at first, haha.
     
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    +1 for keeping the tune short. I usually prefer when songs don't drag on after they've run out of things to "say", so if that's where it ends, that's where it ends.
     
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    That’s where it ends then, cheers guys.

    Anyone here want to try and mix/master it?
     

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